Welcome Day for Erasmus+ Students Spring 2023/2024 at the University of Crete in Rethymno
February 12, 2024 2024-09-04 16:34Welcome Day for Erasmus+ Students Spring 2023/2024 at the University of Crete in Rethymno
Welcome Day for Erasmus+ Students Spring 2023/2024 at the University of Crete in Rethymno
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“The Orientation Day for incoming Erasmus+ students for the spring semester of 2023/2024 was held on Friday, 9th February 2024, at the Gallos University Campus in Rethymno.
The Department of International Relations at the University of Crete in Rethymno welcomed approximately 30 students from various higher education institutions abroad. These students will be studying at the Schools of Philosophy, Social Sciences, and Education at our University during the current spring semester.”
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The Orientation Day for incoming Erasmus+ students for the spring semester of 2023/2024 was held on Friday, 9th February 2024, at the Gallos University Campus in Rethymno.
The Department of International Relations at the University of Crete in Rethymno welcomed approximately 30 students from various higher education institutions abroad. These students will be studying at the Schools of Philosophy, Social Sciences, and Education at our University during the current spring semester.
For more info:
https://www.uoc.gr/intrel/en/new-en/3954-orientation-d-spring-semester-2023-2024
